Yucca Flat Saddle Blanket WHICH ONE IS BETTER? First Person Or Third Person?

WHICH ONE IS BETTER? First person or third person? - yucca flat saddle blanket

What do you do?

Here is my starting point in the first person is
Soon after the mobile home 3 Yucca Street was a little pain in one eye. His house was chipping gray color with broken windows. The ceiling tiles fall into brush. This was my home. The best thing about my house was uncomfortable for sale sign on my porch distorted. I stood in front of the sign with her, as if my eyes were there, permanently fixed. My favorite pastel-pink houses were buried under the dust. Her red hair blowing in the hot wind. He smiled damaged in a way but if you are in my situation.

Or third

Soon after the mobile home 3 Yucca Street was a little pain in one eye. His house was chipping gray color on SIn parallel with broken windows. The ceiling tiles fall into brush. The warped wooden porch fell next to a sign revealing the words "for sale". The girl who lived in this house unpleasant struggled against the label. Their pale pink floors were buried in the dust. His red hair fluttered in the warm breeze, like the eyes of deep blue-based signal as a permanently fixed in position. He wore a smile that was almost as corrupt.